watch our short film

[bmashbat]

Fellow dubbers,

please take your time and watch our short film.
My friend recently bought a WRX, so we did a short video for that. Its only 2 minutes.

Constructive criticism appreciated.

Cheers

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x4viv...I4700dQXo8igIl

[AHFlynn]

pretty cool vid

[bmann]

Very cool My only thoughts were that the parking garage scenes at the beginning were a bit dark (maybe it's my monitor), need to pump up the engine sound from 1:42 to 2:00

Love that the dribbling was synced with the music, especially at 1:53

Needs a more aggressive final hoop or like a barrage of layups so you feel like you just got pwnt.

[Fapfapfap00]

real good stuff

[4motionvr6dub]

That was pretty good, cool car

[kingrukus]

nice vid, but would be better with more engine noise.

[HideYoKids]

might want to edit out the "fellow dubbers:" part of your post before the daytime I-Hate-Volkswagen crew wakes up

[BigSkyGLI]

the graduates take notice...this is how it is done.

[IwannaGTI]

very well done. Just needs to be brighter at the beginning.

[Newbie16ver]

very high quality work


constructive criticism: mixed it up with lots of different basketball shots, but too used too many direct front shots of the Rex

[gambit420s]

Wait WTF is happening here?
1 post noob comes begging for views and no one has a problem with this?

[bmashbat]

Thanks everybody for your input. I am working on another video, and I'll definitely keep these tips in the back of my head.

Wait WTF is happening here?
1 post noob comes begging for views and no one has a problem with this?

I guess everyone is cool here.

[IwannaGTI]

Wait WTF is happening here?
1 post noob comes begging for views and no one has a problem with this?

TCL New years resolution to be nice?

OR because minus a few minor faults with brightness and sound, he did a damn good job.

[VierSpeed]

Wait WTF is happening here?
1 post noob comes begging for views and no one has a problem with this?

Because not extrovert hipster VW fanboy.


Great video. I have a few comments, should you be open to them:

- As others have said, a degree or two more engine/exhaust audio would add a bit more depth and engagement to the driving scenes
- A couple of the more open city street scenes while hanging out the window / holding the camera along the side of the car were a bit bland (ex. 1:22) - at least compared to the great colours and contrasts of the downtown scenes

Otherwise, good work. You have a good sense of matching audio to video and incorporating different 'storylines' without being distracting or overwhelming.

[Aonarch]

Was not expecting an Asian.

[RussWheeler]

Was expecting hipster broken VW. Was expecting to leave angry.


Leaving very happy. Good job. Nice car.

[89VWdieselGolf]

did i just watch a Subaru commercial??

Awesome work

[phryxis]

Is this the new Batman trailer?



Nice video work, really enjoyed it.

[goofyboots]

[ncsumecheng]

Good work, you did very well. Just needs moar rev/motor/excitement/not legal stuff.

I like these: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QxVVFmoReFc

[Seki]

[SLK350]

Why did he take his basketball to the beach?

[aethelwulf]

Wait WTF is happening here?
1 post noob comes begging for views and no one has a problem with this?

I have no problem with it when they bring a quality video like this.

[66Satellite]

Was expecting hipster broken VW. Was expecting to leave angry.

[JMillerUA6]

Why did he take his basketball to the beach?

He didn't have a beach ball?

Nice vid OP.

[dcmix5]

I guess I have a different view of the world...I laughed nearly the entire time. If this video contained a Veyron driven by Michael Jordan in his prime or something, I could get on board.

It was similar to this:

[Dr. Woo]

Nice! Really enjoyed that. I agree with others who say "moar engine noise."

And only five seconds of credits. Some other vid makers that frequent this site could learn a thing or two.

[CodeMan]

Very well done. I liked the orchestra hits synced with the dribbling.

But yes, more engine noises needed.

[surefooted]

That was very good. Just more engine sound and a climactic dunk or something (I was fully expecting him to throw one down with the music)...

Great job!

[SLK350]

That was very good. Just more engine sound and a climactic dunk or something (I was fully expecting him to throw one down with the music)...

Great job!

He's Asian, your expectations are too high.
Now if the video had a Chrysler 300, maybe there would have been a dunk.

[Ernie McCracken]

Needs better balance. Set your feet shoulder width apart, square up with your right foot pointing at the rim, and land in the same footprints that you leap from. Think of yourself as shooting from within a phone booth.

/TCL'd

[nunumkv]

i like!

[trisgolf]

Great work! Should have dunk/jump over the car for closing scene.

[warrenW]

pretty sick

[JimmyD]

Why did he take his basketball to the beach?

Isn't the answer obvious? BECAUSE RACECAR