Looks great. The colors are nice.
My main criticism is the focus pulling. Wit a lot of DSLR cinema "focus finding" and "focus pulling" has become a thing, and it works sometimes, but it has become a bit over used.
Focus pulls should be used to aid in the scene, and have a purpose. Pulling focus for the "oh cool" effect can work on a small scale, but over using it will make the camera an "actor" in the film making and I'm never a fan of that.
It also will look as if you're not quite sure how to focus and follow focus through your shots.
The video is great, just a minor thing on the composition stand point. Focus pulls work great for music videos, but I wouldn't use them on an actual narrative piece unless the scene calls for it.