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    09-23-2012 12:32 AM #1
    This is my latest set from last weekend. I'd really like to know what you all think. Let me know what I can do better next time, I'm always trying to improve. Thanks in advance.
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    Mason's Tropic Warehouse_01 by A. Feliciano Photo & Design, on Flickr
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    Mason's Tropic Warehouse_02 by A. Feliciano Photo & Design, on Flickr
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    Mason's Tropic Warehouse_06 by A. Feliciano Photo & Design, on Flickr

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    09-25-2012 10:01 AM #2
    Looking good actually.

    #6 could be level with the horizon.

    #2 looks like it is not straight, but after looking at the main building's vertical beams, it is straight, but looks crooked, so I would not use it, but that is just me.

    A little bit more sharpness and contrast would make them look a bit better, but overall, they are great.

    I personally do not like watermarks.
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    09-25-2012 09:32 PM #3
    #2 was on a slope that's why it looks weird. I'll keep in mind to bump the contrast and sharpness next time. Thanks for the thoughts and suggestions!

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    09-25-2012 11:42 PM #4
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    Looking good actually.

    I personally do not like watermarks.
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